Am I any good at all? Should I keep writing or quit?

Wow, I would definitely say you are good. (here, deflate your head), But no. I have always loved poetry in three lines, especially when it rhymes as well as yours, with as good a rhythm. I wondered where you were going, you hooked me with the third stanza and brought me tumbling and running, being pelted with hail all to the horrific realization. Wow, eye opening. Great use of language, pathos, suspense. I am staggered.